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All Deviations
All Deviations




A lightbulb exploded one day in my dream,
And the fragments of glass ripped through every seam
That stretched as it held my sanity in—
Fine stitches I’d made before light grew dim,
And the sole source of water to quench my great thirst
Was locked in the lightbulb, and the only thing worse
Was the lack of a cord to unleash the flow,
And alas, the thread that I’d use to sew
The seams closed was in short supply,
And nothing had ever hung as high
As that lightbulb, teasing me up in the air,
Its filament flickering here and then there,
Playing with shadows that danced through my mind,
Distorting them, throwing them out with the rind
Of an orange I’d been sucking for juice so sweet
That my terrible needs it never could meet,
So I ended up dreaming of reaching the bulb
And sending the light rushing out to grab hold
Of the last real hope that was left in the dark,
But nothing could find that withering spark,
And the flood that was meant to serve me so well?
It washed it away, and the last I heard tell,
A new lightbulb lit up the room in my thoughts,
But I never was sure; alas, I was caught
In the glass raining down, and the filament fell,
And rested, like a leaf, on top of my hell.
©2006-2008 ~LostintheWhirlwind
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~NezumizDarkWish:iconNezumizDarkWish: Nov 26, 2006, 6:41:46 PM
Interesting concepts... I like your word choice. :nod:

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~LostintheWhirlwind:iconLostintheWhirlwind: Nov 26, 2006, 7:03:57 PM
Thank you. =)

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Speak softly and carry a thermal nuclear device.
~therottenheart:icontherottenheart: Nov 26, 2006, 7:47:25 PM
hmmm, it doesn't flow very well....but I suppose I'll go to hell
for the words I say......will go away....and I will be wrong once more

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Bow down before the jolly boots of doom...!!!!

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~DaLuz:iconDaLuz: Nov 27, 2006, 12:34:52 PM
I really like the imagery in this. It creates really vivid images in my head.

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Praying for serenity...
praying for release.
~LostintheWhirlwind:iconLostintheWhirlwind: Nov 27, 2006, 3:49:38 PM
Thank you.

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Speak softly and carry a thermal nuclear device.
~LostintheWhirlwind:iconLostintheWhirlwind: Nov 27, 2006, 3:55:23 PM
Ha, I like that. Might develop it.

Thanks, Lloyd. =D

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Speak softly and carry a thermal nuclear device.
~therottenheart:icontherottenheart: Nov 27, 2006, 8:34:18 PM
You so very welcome Ana my dear....

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Bow down before the jolly boots of doom...!!!!

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Yes yes at long last you too can see my website.....[link]
~AuroraTeresa:iconAuroraTeresa: Nov 29, 2006, 2:33:37 PM
your enjambment makes my world a sunshiney place.
~LostintheWhirlwind:iconLostintheWhirlwind: Nov 29, 2006, 5:56:23 PM
Never heard enjambment described as "sunshine-y", but I'll go with that. =D

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Speak softly and carry a thermal nuclear device.